I'm
depressed aNd
feeling Vile
I stagger through my day
Looking for
human emotIon, but I can't make it out
of BeD
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The online conversation of the CW 302.2 class at San Francisco State University.
That last line definitely stuck with me as it does a complete left turn from the pace of the poem.
ReplyDeleteThe use of vile is great! One of those words that is often over looked in my opinion.
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