My fingers spread wide, calling to different points
Cold Concrete
Strong and hollow
Like our friendship
the crisp wind using branches as its dance partner
Sliver of a ghastly moon, smiling
This is
my
last
goodbye
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"This is My Last Goodbye" makes me think of the song Goodbye by Jeff Buckley, it's really great you should listen to it. I really liked this I felt every line that you wrote. I actually felt like I was the branches dancing with the wind.
ReplyDeleteI appreciated the Jeff Buckley shout out.
ReplyDeletethe format gives it the affect of a goodbye as it were being blown away. maybe its just me.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this posting. I loved the imagery and the surprising comparison of friendship to something strong and hollow.
ReplyDeleteYou gave me the inspiration for my FREEDOM piece. I love it and it kind of stabs me at the end, like a good lovecraft. :-) I really enjoyed it!
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